This is my first rythym project. I just played around with the same line but I adjusted the thickness of the lines. I think that the lines kind of make it look like it has waves.

rythem project

I think my second rythym project is like a tunnel if you look at it one way it goes in but it can go out at the same time.the lines are rough and end to make a white line which i think draws you in like a tunnel . I like it a lot because it is like a optical illusion

the hay wain

I am critiquing The Hay Wain by Constable. It is representational to the home of a farmer. The negative space has lots of colour from the trees. It was made in 1821. I like this panting because it is very realistic.the colour shape and size of the wain in the panting makes it very real liks the wood and the weals are vary detailed



I think the colors in the hay wain gives off a calm comfortable fealing to the viewer of the panting

                                  i think  the lines are small crisp lines  they are a range of small to big lines i think the way he did the lines makes it more realistic i think the shape of the ducks and the animal near the water  are not realistic the rest is vary realistic 

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